FEEDBACK THAT I GOT:
I love your front cover and contents page , your cover lines are teasers are really eye catching and easy to understand, although i think that your image should have a connection with your cover lines and teasers please. Great work overall. (Vivian)
hi, I like your front cover and content page because your front cover links to the content page because of the colours you had used which went really well and your content page looks formal and easy to read. One thing I would say is to add few more images to your content page (Natasha)
hey I really like your contents and your front cover because first of all you've got exciting teasers(headings). rather than using one artist image you used more than one which is good and shows your creativity. You haven't got too many headlines as its easy to recognise that this is a college magazine. I like the way you laid it out, your layout looks well cool. However I would say make some space for other news or pictures as with more images it could have make it more interesting for the audience to buy. On the other side your contents looks like a original contents page especially for your audience as for them it would attract them to look at it. Its well organised and proper outlined in a clear way. You've numbered it using big fonts and you've got bigger images. Overall your contents page looks like an original magazine contents page but you could have puted as i said earlier bit more images to connect with the headings rather than writing the whole thing. (Fahmi)
THINGS I'VE LEARNED
The things I have learned from the feedbacks is that I should use more images on the contents page, because that would attract people more to it. This has been said twice, so I should pay more attention to it next time.
Also someone has said that my image should have a connection with my cover lines and teasers, what is also very helpfull.
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